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揭秘美国金融工程PS怎么写以及范文

时间:2015-11-19  / 编辑:liliang

  美国留学有些学生会选择金融工程专业,而金融工程是一门综合了金融学、数学和计算机科学的交叉学科,其课程通常由大学的商学院、数学系和工程学院联合授课,其课程由于集中于金融领域,所以深度远远超过MBA金融方面的课程,通常包括股票市场分析、投资组合分析、期货和期权、资产定价、资本预算、固定收益分析、利率模型、金融风险管理等课程。申请美国金融工程专业部分美国大学要求学生提供PS,那么如何写PS呢?下面一诺留学小编为大家介绍美国金融工程PS怎么写以及范文分享。

  美国金融工程ps怎么写?

  在欧美,PS归为ESSAY(漫谈)类,是一种短小精悍的文体。笔者曾深入研究过欧美出版的优秀PS文选,无不短小精悍,内容却非常丰满,文笔优美。一般来说一篇PS的正常长度为600—800英文单词,而相当多的中国申请人的PS超长。

  很多中国申请人试图把自己的方方面面的优点和成绩展示出来,须知PS不是简历的详细补充,许多信息可以通过其它文件展示(如学习成绩等)。美国大学的招生人员曾谈到:在留学申请旺季时,面对堆积如山的文件,一般他们审查一个PS的时间只有2、3分钟,那种长篇大论类的PS只能让人心生厌烦。

  1、PS必须紧扣所要申请那个专业的主题写,主线要明确,不要盲目的个性化

  许多人都一知半解地听说PS需要“独特个性”(unique),和“煽情”(Emotional),因此挖空心思地找自己的“独特“点和乱“煽情“,结果往往南辕北辙,许多中国申请人往往用大段篇幅写一些不相干的个性,在招生者眼中,这完全不着边际(make no sense)。必须明确,PS这样一篇短短数百字的文章是没有地方去说不相干的废话的。通过PS您必须让招生者知道您选择该专业的明确和强烈的动机,同时具备充分的条件完成该专业的学习。当然在这个基础上每个人都可以通过很独特而有个性的文字来表达自己。如笔者曾经修改过一份申请CS(计算机专业)的 PS,原文用了数百字描述他如何开展班级工作的经历。笔者将其改为:我喜欢思考,如何让事物运转得更有效率。在大学期间我担任班级文艺委员职务。在工作初期,成员经常因为性格、工作方式各异产生矛盾。后来我根据每个人情况,让性格外向,善于与人交际的人做外联及工作将协调沟通的工作;让善于思考、思维活跃、勇于创新的人做各项工作的筹备及策划工作;让有远见、有凝聚力的人做整个工作的进度安排、及分配各项任务。这样安排的结果是系统发挥了最佳效率。既突出了个性,又紧扣申请CS专业应具有的严谨的系统思维能力这一重要素质体现了出来。

  2、结构简单,衔接紧密,

  3、主线明确,便于理解

  “Simple is the best”请记住,招生人员每天要读大量的申请资料,只有那种简单有力重点突出的的文章才能打动招生人员。留学文书其实是您个人的广告,您仔细想想,给您留下深刻印象的广告哪个不是简明而有力的?中国申请人往往倾向于把自己的优点不分主次全都告诉招生人员,导致的结果就是招生人员对您的整体印象的模糊。笔者认为,PS中什么都是重点,就等于没有重点。

  美国金融工程PS范文:

  Having a flair for Economics and accounting I have decided that I want a degree in Accounting and Finance or Management. The many brilliant representatives of the management community around the world have strengthened that resolve.

  When I worked in my school as a tutor of English as a Second Language for students from a community school in Muscat, I realized the importance of a strong leader who could organize, command respect, and be able to work well with others. These ideas were further enforced by my month long internship at Novartis Pharmaceutical (Accounts and Finance Department and Human Resources Department).

  I attended the Harvard Model Congress in Paris and won the Award of Distinction. One skill in particular that contributed to this award was my confident public speaking.

  The last 4 months have been crucial in my learning of real world business and economics. For my IB Extended Essay, titled “To What Extent Does Subway in Oman Operate as an Oligopoly”, I set out to prove the oligpolistic structure of the fast food market in Oman. In this effort, I have come across many real life complexities in pricing behaviour, profit making and other aspects of the Theory of the Firm. While attempting to explain these alternate theories of firms I have developed a keen interest in analyzing and understanding how the world of business works.

  After an undergraduate degree in accounting and finance or management I plan to go onto post graduate studies and work on an MBA. A strong performance in a BA will allow me to move onto an MBA and only then shall I be satisfied.

  For the last four years I have been part of our schools volleyball team ICE. We have retained our ISAC (Inter Schools Activities Conference, Middle East) title for four years. Playing in the power hitters (spiker) position requires immense physical fitness and to accomplish that I regularly go to the gym for fitness training. I am also part of my school track and field team. Being the fastest sprinter in the school since 11th grade the 100m, 200m and 400m races are my specialty even though I still pursue long distance running. In my spare time I explore and master the computer as I am conversant with a Visual Basic Programming course. It is imperative for me to have the latest hardware and software and I make it a point to install everything myself. I also learn Urdu as it is my native tongue and a link to my culture, to maintain that is crucial.

  Living in a diverse international community of over 52 nationalities has allowed to me recognize and appreciate different cultures. With the experience I have and the strong motivation to craft a bright future I feel I can justify my decision to pursue a career in Accounting and Finance or Management.

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